Comments on: HtSiE Chapter Five: A Par Four Life

By: British airlines.

British airlines. — Wed, 20 May 2009 17:19:35 +0000

Frontier airlines….

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By: Nathan

Nathan — Fri, 03 Apr 2009 21:31:20 +0000

I can understand the confusion on the written page. It begs the question if she had been Agnes from the start, would we be asking why you tried out Edna today?

Without reading a chapter and only listening to them I agree with god and Patrick, Edna’s death is the one that helped us agree with Edwin to finally move down the path to show the world how to truly, Succeed in Evil.

By: GOD

GOD — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 04:48:51 +0000

Please, she should stay Edna!

I loved that Ed-’win’ was the hero and Ed-’na’ was the tragic death that affects the hero and spurs him into action.

By: Patrick

Patrick — Tue, 24 Mar 2009 18:00:19 +0000

I am aware and it is being corrected. Of course, the downloads are out of the bag… soooo. As for the Agnes/Edna switch. Everybody I’ve had read actual chapters has commented that Edwin and Edna look too similar on the page. I fear they are right. But to you ( and to me, I must confess ) secretly she will always be Edna.

By: Jacob

Jacob — Tue, 24 Mar 2009 17:20:10 +0000

I really hate to be the messenger to bring bad news, but I noticed that you renamed Edwin’s secretary “Agnes” in chapter 4, but have returned to calling her “Edna” in chapter 5. If you have to choose one or the other, I suggest sticking with the Edna that we all know and love.
Love the book so far and anxiously awaiting the next chapters (and books 2-4).